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"Three weeks ago, a Senate committeeheard testimonyon a bill that could bring Puerto Rico a step closer to becoming the 51ststate. ThePuerto Rico Democracy Act of 2010, whichpassed the Housein late April, would grant the territory's residents a vote on the island's political status, with options including statehood or independence. If Puerto Rico were to become the 51ststate—and granted, that's at least four ifs away—federal lawrequires that a new star be added to the American flag. One can't help but wonder: Where would we put it?"